The squad members (Dell, Nix, and Sergeant Vahn) are sketches rather than characters. Dell is "the one with dark humor." Nix is "the religious one." Vahn is "the stern but caring NCO." When they begin to be consumed by their suits, the tragedy is abstract because their pre-suit personalities were never vivid. Add 2-3 pages of pre-mission downtime (e.g., a card game, a shared meal) to establish distinct voices before the erasure begins. Without that, their conversions feel like plot mechanics, not losses.
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