How Not To Write A Screenplay 101 Common Mistakes Most Screenwriters Make -

A story without a theme is a sequence of events. What is the movie about ? (Love? Greed? Forgiveness?) If you don’t know, neither will we.

“He...well...he went...to the store. And then—I don’t know—he left.” It reads as indecisive writing. A story without a theme is a sequence of events

How Not to Write a Screenplay: 101 Common Mistakes Most Screenwriters Make A story without a theme is a sequence of events